Start Your Story With a Bang
I have learned that starting your story with a bang is the best way to get a publisher’s attention.
It doesn’t have to be a full-on action or intimate scene (although that is what has worked for me) but something that hooks their attention. It can be anything from the character being stuck in a hilarious situation to a dream they are having; the sky is the limit.
The main thing is to grab the reader’s attention and keep it by being original. They don’t want to read something like so many they have seen before. You must remember that the person evaluating your story has a lot on their plate in the form of hundreds of submitted manuscripts. There must be something special about yours that hooks them from the beginning.
Often, the title of your submission catches their attention. Make your title bold and original. It should make them laugh or say, “What on Earth?” Either way, they need to be intrigued. This brings me to the dreaded query letter.
Keep it short and straightforward. This is me; this is what I have accomplished in the writing world thus far, and this is the story I am proposing to you. As I said, these editors don’t have time to fool around.
And finally, don’t get down when the inevitable but dreaded rejection letter comes. No author on the planet has not been rejected by one company or another. It happens. Despite our belief that our book is awesome, it may not fit the needs of the publishing house to which you have submitted it. But as I always say, keep writing, keep trying, and most of all, don’t give up!
Stephen King and Nora Roberts did not get where they are today by giving up.
So, my advice to you is this: Keep trying. You will hit roadblocks, bumps, and potholes, but in the end, it is still a road, and you will get to where you are going if you stay on it.
Starting with a bang is certainly a good idea, even if that is not how the book ends up in its final structure. Extracting an exciting scene to use as a prologue is a standard technique in attracting publishers’ attention.
Very great advice. Instead of hooking the readers in the first five pages, these days, with so much other distractions, we need to hook the readers in the first five paragraphs!
Ken Follet’s opening in THE KEY TO REBECCA: The last camel collapsed at noon. Isn’t that a great opening. And the person is a minor character. I love great opening lines. Agents and editors do, too! Be sure to check Texas Tenders right here on Angie’s Diary next week for more ideas on ways to open your story. Blessings from Texas!