The Painters


The Painters - geisha mural

The Painters

Crimson blended with yellow produces a brilliant orange. Michel added a small amount of white to soften the hue to a pale peach.

With this, he finished her kimono and his mural was realized. Stepping back, he lit an unfiltered cigarette. The long wall of his one-room apartment drew him into a lush Japanese garden. He was pleased.


“What is that?” Joyce screeched.

Michel leaned in the doorway. Waving a hand to the wall, he said, “It’s a mural, of course.”

“Oh, my Gawd. That doesn’t come off?” She threw her arms up. “Why’d you do this to my property?”

He ran a hand through his chin-length gray hair. He shrugged unapologetically. “It is art.”

Art? You’re lucky I don’t evict you.” She scoffed. “I gotta go call the painter.”

He heard the painter’s steps before the rapping on the shutters. He opened the pair of French doors then extended his hand. “I am Michel Laurent.”

The man dressed in a white jumpsuit and canvas slip-on sneakers put down a five-gallon bucket of gray paint and shook the hand before him. “Frank Babineaux.”

“Nice to meet you. Would you like a cup of espresso?”


As Michel poured two demitasse cups from the nickel-plated maker, Frank took in the mural. Motioning to a wooden straight-back chair, he said, “Please sit down, Frank.”

“Thanks.” He sipped the black brew as he stared at the scene. “This is really some work of art.”

Michel sat on the other chair. He offered Frank a cigarette. They drank and smoked in silence as they soaked in the landscape.

“It’s really great.” Frank pointed to a portion of the wall. “That little pagoda over there keeps catching my eye.”

“Yes.” Michel smiled proudly.

“Those little birds are fantastic, but the woman is amazing. The way she looks like she is seeing it all for the first time.”

“She is. The gardeners have just finished it exactly to her husband’s specifications. She is overwhelmed that it is as she has always dreamed.”

“Yeah, I can see that now. She’s touched. It’s like she knows she’s loved.”

Michel exhaled. “Yes. She knows it was a labor of love.”

“I’ve never seen anything like it.” Frank shook his head before finishing the cup in one gulp.

“How long did it take you?”

“Five weeks.” Michel stubbed out his cigarette. “Are you a good painter?”

“The best in the Quarter. Hell, probably the best in New Orleans.”

“Good. How many coats will you need to cover it?”

“Probably four or five.” Frank glanced at the five-gallon bucket.

“Okay, I’m going out for a long walk.”

He nodded. “You’re one hell of a painter.”

“Thank you. I’m sure I’ll appreciate your work when I return.”

Michel pulled a cigarette from the pack and put it on the table. He left the apartment without looking back.


  1. Avatar of Andrew J. Sacks
    Andrew J. Sacks says

    Kris, as you know, this is one of my favorite stories of yours. Thank you for gracing the pages of AngiesDiary with it!

  2. Avatar of Craig Murray
    Craig Murray says

    Wonderful, everything a short story should be. My frustration at not having the ending I want is matched by my happiness at not knowing how it ends.
    I can only hope to see more and more of your work

    Thank you


  3. Avatar of Kristin Fouquet
    Kristin Fouquet says

    Andy, thank you. I’ve enjoyed our friendship and reading each other’s writing over the years. You write the best chess articles and I enjoy your flash fiction and poetry as well.

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    Kristin Fouquet says

    It’s nice to find you here, CM. I’m pleased you liked the story even if it left you somewhat frustrated. I like to leave spaces the reader can fill in.

    I’m looking forward to your work. Thanks for reading and commenting.

  5. Avatar of Sissy Pantelis
    Sissy Pantelis says

    This is a very nice story, Kristin. I agree with Craig about the end- but maybe the strong feeling incited by this end is part of the magic power of the story.
    I am looking forward to reading more of your stories 🙂

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    Kristin Fouquet says

    Thanks so much, Sissy. I guess what I was trying to imply in the story is how the creation of art is the most important thing; the fact the other painter appreciated it eased the fact it would be covered up. I also believe people can be artists in any field or occupation if they bring something superior or extraordinary to it.
    Thanks again.

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    Joyce White says

    I agree each of us mustn’t write to please others. I’m glad the painter appreciated the art. I like sand art but hate to see it go away…

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