The Door to Oblivion


The Door to Oblivion

Albert stared in disbelief, he was sure he had seen a door out of the corner of his eye, and yet when he focused on the wall ahead of him there was nothing.

For a brief moment, a feeling of déjà vu entered his mind then was gone as quickly as it had arrived. Turning his gaze deliberately away once more until the wall was once again in his peripheral vision, the door reappeared!

The Door to Oblivion“It must have been a trick of the light,” he thought; “and yet maybe not…”

He walked over to the wall, and reaching out his hands, he carefully felt the entire surface of the wall with his eyes closed, allowing his fingers to do the seeing for him.

“Touch cannot be fooled, unlike my eyes,” or so he reasoned to himself.

Beginning his search at the base of the wall, the soft pads on Albert’s fingertips brushed lightly across the surface. The signals sent to his brain told him that they were touching nothing more than cold, hard, moss-covered damp stone. As his hands continued their search above his head, he rose up onto his toes in an effort to reach as high as he could.

At the same time, his ears tuned themselves in for any audible sign that his fingers may have found a catch of some sort, which, he hoped, would release the elusive door’s locking mechanism, but no sound emanated from the seemingly solid stone wall; in fact, it didn’t dawn on him that he heard no sound of any kind within the space, or even where the space that he occupied at that particular moment in time was.

Abandoning his fingertip search and retreating back across the space to where a stone bench stood against the opposite wall, he deliberately positioned himself on the end of the bench at ninety degrees to the wall, staring straight ahead. Sure enough within a nanosecond, he once more saw the door out of the corner of his eye.

This time, instead of leaping to his feet, or immediately turning his head, Albert remained motionless allowing his peripheral vision to take over. He studied as much detail of the elusive door as he could before his overly inquisitive eyes naturally turned towards it once more.

The door appeared to be approximately four feet wide by six-foot-high. It had three panels inset into it, one large arched panel at the top with two small plain rectangular ones below it sitting side by side. There appeared to be neither keyhole nor handle anywhere on the door, nor was there any visible sign of any kind of hinge, and yet the outer edge of the door was also clearly defined within a doorframe.

The area where the upper panel was located on the supposedly solid rock wall was the one area of the wall with the most moss covering it. Albert decided to explore this area first. So once again he stood up and walked back to where he had stood moments earlier. He stared at the moss for a long time before deciding to try and scrape it away.

Slowly he began removing as much of the moss as he could, halting briefly from time to time to breathe onto his fingertips to warm them as the icy cold of the space and the stone numbed them. He worked for several hours, or so he thought until he felt sure he had exposed the entire top panel. Only another brief spell on the bench opposite would reveal if he had been successful.

Sitting once again at ninety degrees to the door, Albert allowed his peripheral vision to take over once more. Sure enough, he had cleared away the moss which had formerly covered the upper panel in its entirety. A feeling of elation came over him as he now began studying it closely.

Removing the moss had revealed a curious pattern of runes and pentangles surrounding a grotesque mask with what looked like gemstones for eyes, set into the rock. Albert got up once more and went back to the rock.

This time instead of standing facing the rock, he turned ninety degrees to it. His peripheral vision soon focused on the gemstone eyes. Carefully he reached out with his left hand, allowing the fingertips of his hand to brush against the first of the gems. He felt a pleasant warmth being transmitted through his body by the touch of his fingers on the gemstone eye nearest to him.

Careful not to shift his position, he tried to touch the other gemstone eye with the fingers of his right hand. But it was hopeless, no matter how hard he tried; it somehow shifted away from his reach, never allowing him to touch it.

The feeling of déjà vu returned. This time however it did not vanish as before.

Panic immediately set in as Albert realized to his horror that he was being subjected to his lifelong recurring nightmare of the elusive door yet again, only this time he was wide awake, realising too late that the nightmare which he had suffered from since childhood ever since he had got himself locked into the priest-hole in his childhood home, the old Elizabethan farmhouse when he was five years old, had now become a terrifying reality.

His heart began racing, his body was now bathed in a cold sweat as he once again shouted for help, but this time no sound came from his mouth, this time no one would come to wake him, to comfort him.

This time, his relentlessly cruel nightmare had had enough of his escaping back to his human reality, denying it the cruel pleasure of his company, and had decided to wall him up forever in the seventh dimension where the worlds of nightmares like his are their own reality.

Albert screamed as the door in the solid rock within the space opened briefly, pulling him into the seventh dimension beyond before it closed behind him forever, sealing him off from his three-dimensional world, never again allowing him to appear to any other mortal, nor to open for him to retreat back to his reality.

Albert’s screams went unheard. His sweat-soaked bed in the real world was now empty. When his bedroom door was next opened, thanks to his nightmare, no one would miss him. To the world at large Albert had simply never existed.

The grotesque nightmare mask smiled to itself as it prepared to enter another mortal’s mind…

  1. Avatar of Andrew Sacks
    Andrew Sacks says

    Fine tale, Jack! And Poe would not be displeased….

  2. Avatar of Jack Eason
    Jack Eason says

    Thank you Andrew, much appreciated. 🙂

  3. Avatar of Mysti Parker
    Mysti Parker says


    Five stars for you! What a macabre tale, which did have a Poe feel to it, especially the untimely ending for the hero 🙂 I kept asking myself “What’s he doing there?” and then the aha moment came…with a vengeance! Nicely done!

    Since it’s my habit, I bring out my nit-picky pen with great writing. When Albert says…”And yet…”, I’d stick with just “yet”, since both seem a bit redundant. Other than that, great tale, and I hope I don’t see that door anytime soon. 🙂

  4. Avatar of Jack Eason
    Jack Eason says

    You won’t Mysti – and yet… 🙂

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