State Park

4


set the scene
blanket and beer

your striking
good looks helped,
but you were
too – fast, hard to resist

we made up words
to sing, as you
strummed your guitar
I shook
the blanket free
of bugs –

all you really wanted
was sex – sex – I wanted
to sing – create

I began my best song
you wanted bare legs
on a blanket

under an evergreen
sharp needles fell
pinching skin

laid the guitar
on grass
skin scratched
bruised in the park

4 Comments
  1. Avatar of Lynne Levandowski
    Lynne Levandowski says

    Great poem!

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    MR.J says

    Nancy Duci Denofio,
    You are amazing to the writing community. Thank you.
    -Mr.J

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    Nancy Duci Denofio says

    Mr J – I really think you are too. I have had a wonderful time with Angie’s Diary and those I have met here, I certainly hope other’s are just as excited about her wonderful work, as we are. Best to you my fellow VIP! Nancy

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    Nancy Duci Denofio says

    Lynn “Thanks for the kind words about this poem, I bet you guessed the date and place? Pine Trees, creating words… etc. oh, time goes too fast. Thanks, Nancy

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