Close your eyes
take a walk
in the light
between your eyes
see the tree swaying
take a drink
from the bubbles of the sea
hear the roar
the lion
taste the buds
as they unfold
from the nectars
like life in infancy
hear the sound
the rumble of the earth
whispering desert haze
touch your face
feel your heart
its thumping beat
feel your blood
your hope for life
wrap around you
the kiss of love
the lash of struggle
be a man
be my guest.
Your dreams come alive with your eye’s closed and your mind alive and awake. You have a bounce in your words, carrying the reader along your path. Nancy
Thank you very much. I am beginning to gain some confidence and hope to learn some more. I sincerely appreciate your comments
Truly beautiful Biola, thank you 😀
A very special poem indeed!
Thanks for sharing this.
Gwen
I am so grateful for these very wonderful comments! Thanks Jack and Gwen I appreciate these helpful thoughts.