Can You Feel Me?


If my eyes are the window to my soul, then it serves s a mirror for you.  Move closer .Ahh, right there. Can you see yourself? Because you reside in the deepest part of my being. When I breathe, I inhale your dreams. They have become my goals……Can u see them?

If you can really read my thoughts then it should serve as a tape recording of your voice. Because you stay on my mind and your character sounds off like a song I can’t wait to play. Can you hear my thoughts? Then sing along with me tonight. For, I am playing your song…….

If my heart has a door, are u standing there knocking? There is no need for you to knock. You see I have already let you in. I am just standing here waiting for you to step in and close the door to my heart.  Be gentle when you enter my heart. For I have not allowed anyone in this room for a very long time……

If my body is my temple then I invite you to come in for services.  Our love making will become sacred to me and I will honor your presence like the king that you are. I want to feel you in the morning. I want to taste you in the afternoon and scream your name in the middle of the night.

I know you can see my intentions because they are buried in my soul where you reside.

I know you hear me calling for you. Because you are running around’ inside my thoughts.

I know you entered into my heart last night because I felt you as you eased the door shut ever so gently.

I know my body has been put on layaway for you because my dream was waiting when I closed my eyes…

Can you feel me?

  1. Avatar of Nancy Denofio
    Nancy Denofio says

    This is a wonderful prose poem where you bring the characters together at the end but then leave the reader guessing if he ever made it inside the door, I love prose poems and especially those left with no answer. Nice job. Nancy

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    Cynthia Metcalf Miller says

    Thank You Nancy. I am glad you like it. I have more poetry on my website and my books all have a poem that starts each chapter.
    Check out my website

  3. Avatar of Nancy Duci Denofio
    Nancy Duci Denofio says

    I have an entire, book on paper, from a typewriter it is so old, and each chapter starts with a poem. It’s wonderful to open up your heart. Hugs Nancy

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    Nancy Duci Denofio says

    Where can you purchase Rare Form?

  5. Avatar of Cynthia Miller
    Cynthia Miller says

    You may purchase my book at for signed copies. Or Barnes and nobles, Amazon for ebooks.

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    Cynthia Metcalf Miller says

    You may purchase a signed copy at
    For Kindle and Nook you must visit Amazon and Barnes and Nobles

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